Wednesday, October 18, 2017

Persuasive Writing (Why art should be more involved in schools)

2 comments:

  1. Hi catrin I really liked your speech because I to believe that the arts should be more involved in school I also thought that your transitions were Really good and worked quite well.

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  2. That was a cool topic Catrin. I like the way you decorated the Queue cards. But next time you should record in somewhere less echo-ey. Also you may have mixed up the final reason and the conclusion.

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