Hi there my name is Renee i go to Edmund Hillary school and i would like to say how i love how you posted those adorable pictures of little guinea pigs. It is very thoughtful how you share to the world how to look after their own guinea pigs. Maybe if you have extra time drop off a comment on my blog? http://edhillreneec.blogspot.co.nz/
Great explanation writing this term Catrin. You have explained to your audience some great tips for taking care of a guinea pig, but it would have been great to see you include at least one more micro idea and a sum up. Great topic sentences and detail in your paragraphs.
Hi there my name is Renee i go to Edmund Hillary school and i would like to say how i love how you posted those adorable pictures of little guinea pigs. It is very thoughtful how you share to the world how to look after their own guinea pigs. Maybe if you have extra time drop off a comment on my blog?
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DeleteGreat explanation writing this term Catrin. You have explained to your audience some great tips for taking care of a guinea pig, but it would have been great to see you include at least one more micro idea and a sum up. Great topic sentences and detail in your paragraphs.
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